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Friday, December 20, 2019

Summer learning journey



I id this for my summer learning journey. We had to write what our dream job, who could help us, and how are they going to help me. What is your dream job? please comment and tell me.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Haemo, this is Shannon

    Wow, a fusion energy scientist is an amazing career. What do you have to do in this job?

    I like how you have included why you this is your dream. It’s awesome that you wanna be like your dad, he must be very proud and will be extremely helpful in you achieving this goal. Math, literacy, and science will be vital and he will be a brilliant asset.

    Your flow chart is also amazing. It’s impressively constructed and you’ve obviously put a lot of hard work into it. Well done.

    Perhaps you could increase the size of the zig zag boxes so the text fits in them better. This would make them a bit more legible and help your readers.

    Happy blogging,
    Shannon

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